Di Atas Layar CINTA
BEZA SAMA BERBEDA
Verse1
Bagai dalam jurang di lautan
Bagai jauh mega di awangan
Hakikatnya kelahiran kau & aku berbeza
Umpama kilau intan permata
Terbandingkan silauan kaca
Biarpun sekilas tampak serupa
Namun zahirnya tetap berbeda
Chorus
Hentilah kau membenci
Rintihan naluri ini
Terima daku seadanya
Aku hadir begini
Jangan kau dibuta
Bayang beza perbedaan
Semarakkan lakaran persamaan
Antara kita
Verse2
Walau dalam jurang di lautan
Walau jauh mega di awangan
Hakikatnya kelahiran kita luhurnya sama
Umpama kilau intan permata
Terbandingkan silauan kaca
Biarpun jauhari mampu membeda
Namun di mata seri nan sama
Bridge
Usah terperdaya
Amarah di dada
Yang mengaburi minda
Meracun kasih
Menuba cinta
Jiwa manusia
This entry is made coz I wanna join my beloved GUBUans Miss MinCi & Mr Irzan mumbling about LOVE :: I donno what happened to these 2 GUBUans which made them write some JIWANG JIWING type of entry on LittleHealer & LifeInside :: But for the excitement - although aku haram tak pernah melibatkan jiwa nurani aku ni dalam aroma perCHENTAan - I wanna JOIN them MUMBLING ABOUT LOVE & LIFE too - My STYLE of course!! hehe
Now, before I start - I have to tell you guys a story :: Some have already been told bout this, others not :: Regardless, this stroy is crucial for you to understand what is needed from this entry :: But this story is LOOOONGGG!! So, IF YOU GUYS cant be bothered to read them all - SKIPPY SKIP to the FINAL bit where I put the banner as your guide, ok??
Here goes... ... ...
You see, my life totally changed since I made acquaintance with La Diva Noraniza for the 1st time back in 2004 in TMMAK Melaka :: I got to know mANIra :: I got to be closer to Noraniza in person :: I got to be featured in her album!! :: I got to be on TV!! :: I got this :: I got that :: Dont wanna bother listing it all here :: Point is - much of my dreams CAME TRUE :: & if there's only one person I should be thankful to - THE PERSON HAS TO BE my most beloved Mr Fedtri Yahya!!
Fedtri Yahya is a very strong icon for Noraniza Idris :: To date he has been writing up lyrics for not only Noraniza but also other leading artists in Malaysia including Nora and Liza Hanim :: He is ONE HACK OF A GUY when it comes to Malay Prosa Klasik bla bla :: Being a genius in this regard, he has gained much trusts from many of our local composers who want him to write lyrics for their songs :: One of whom is SHARON PAUL ::
And so it happened that once upon a time, Mr Fedtri Yahya :: having believed strongly in my 'talent' - TQ abang!! hehe :: forwarded to me one of the songs which SHARON gave to him so that I can help him in melodizing the song - to see if the lyrics FIT with the music :: Well well well - ME BEING ME is just SOOO SIMPLY ME!! Silap besar la org kasi aku lagu - aku buat jadi cam HAK MILIK AKU gitu haha :: And so I sang for him the song with a lil' bit of changes made here and there :: And I forwarded the 'end-product' to Mr Fedtri Yahya...
And so SILAP BESAR GAK LA aku mengada2 berLENGGOK sakan :: Mr Fedtri Yahya, having fallen in love with my LENGGOK style, forwarded the song to SHARON PAUL :: Wawaweee !! & SHARON too happened to like my version of the SONG!! Maka dengan itu, bermulalah satu sejarah baru dalam idop aku :: To date, I have been asked for quite a few times to collaborate with SHARON & FEDTRI in making MUSICS & LYRICS - Hohoyeaaa!!!
All thanx to Mr FEDTRI YAHYA!! I think this thing can be a cool credit for me to write in my CV rite?? What u think guys?? Hohohoo...
Cut it short la ek.. The hack does this story got to do with my entry, rite? :: SIMPLE - Abg FEDT tersayang has forwarded one latest song to me :: And the song is entitled DI ATAS LAYAR CINTA...
YERPPP GUYS!! CINTAAAAAAAAA!!! haha - kira ok la tu.. One word to justified my intention of wanting to join Miss MinCi & Mr Irzan mumbling about LOOOVVVEEEEE hahaha..
OK OK... Surely u dont expect this entry to end here rite?? Coz I havent told u about the lyrics I put above.. What has it got to do with our WHOLE STORY..
Again.. To cut it short - this song BUNYI GILER POP-BALAD HABIS!! But TO MY AMAZEMET bro FEDTRI asked me to sing it with LENGGOK NORANIZA IDRIS's style :: I tell you, IT IS ONE HACK OF A JOB!!! Warghhhh!! Kepala aku naik kematu pk cara nak bawak lagu ni tau!! PENINGGGG!! Sekali dua dengar lagu ni ada cam WINTER SONATA kot (approved by my beloved roomie - WanZul hehe).. Tak alih2 nak kena bawak gaya AWALLAH DONDANG - camne tu??!!!
NOWWWW!! Here comes YOUR PART, GUYS!! YESSSSSS!!! I NEED YOUR HELP WITH THIS ONE!!
My plan is to sing this song in 2 style, OK.. Mr FEDTRI gave me a lyric which I should use.. But due to the fact that I need to KILL the Pop-Balad rhythm from this song, I wanna MAKE ONE COMPLETE POP-BALAD style FIRST so that I can identify what sort of Pop-Balad rhtyhms that I need to INJECT WITH LETHAL DOSE OF Anaesthetic and TRANSPLANT a new ETHNICAL & TRADITIONAL style in the song!! I have already got the IDEA mapped in my PALA OTAK... hehe
What I want you guys to help me with is amend my LYRICS for the Pop-Balad style which I've made above :: Kaifiyat dia?? Easy bz... Read the LYRICS :: Ammend any inappropriate or non-poetic words :: And LET ME KNOW OF YOUR IDEAS in the COMMENT BOX
Points to note :: I want the theme to be based on one of LifeInside's entry entitled PERSAMAAN DAN PERBEZAAN :: The lyrics should endeavour the meaning of DIFFERENCES AND SIMILARITY in HUMAN NATURE :: Lantak korg la nak merapu apa.. Yg penting tema tak lari :: Plus, ANY AMMENDMENTS made must use the SAME AMOUNT of SUKU KATA as per contained in my original lyrics ::
What can you get from collaborating with me in this PROJECT?? Wahuhuu... Sorry I CANT OFFER YOU MONEY :: Money CANNOT BUY LOVE & HAPPINESS - rite Mirul??? hehehe.. But the LEAST that I can offer is TO LET YOU LISTEN TO THE SONG after I've compiled it - HOW DOES THAT SOUND?!! OK ke??...
Plz do HELP ME here, guys!! I wanna make this PROJECT an EXTRAVAGANZA MEGA ONE!! Coz I need to win Bro FEDT's & SHARON's hearts, both at the same time :: & I believe you guys can help me DO THAT!!
I thank you in advance.. The lyrics will be finalized BEFORE SUNDAY the 25th of FEB - SO PLZ HURRY UP PEEPS!!
I'm awaiting your brilliant IDEASSSS :D
posted by Mohammad Ihab Ismail | 9:11 pm
24 Comments:
Although I don't understand the lyrics, the music I find terrific. I put you under my favorites. I'm afraid I can't help you with your request. Good luck!!
tuwit.. mcm tk paham sket... kiranya kitrog tlg kasik idea buat lirik tanpa dgr melodi ah eh?
knp dgn lirik asal yg nih? apa beza dgn lirik pop balad ?
eyy ihab..
i lyk the lyrics..
except aku rasa takde sequence kat bab jiwa manusia dan ayat sebelom dia..
so mebbe bley tukaq kot? but so far ku takde idea..will let u know asap~
ngadakan aku? macamla aku lolok ke ape ke nak komen2 lagu ko..heh heh heh
tqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq :-L
oooooooooooo.. proof read ker? cett... barulah aku paham... oh.. kalo cam tuh aku dah rasa lirik nih cantik sekali...
Salam oi sumer sumer!!
Humang aih!! CEPAT BANGAT korg RESPON!! Wahahaha.. Makacih makacih atas sambutan hangat!! :D
Aku nak tido dah ni tanda esok ada program awal... Thanx for ya thoughts..
NADH oi!! Glad you like the BEAR!! Walaupon benarnya ada byk secret di blakang si BEAR itu yg aku takleh kasitau ko hahaha.. Tanda CONFIDENTIALITY antara aku ngan MIRUL je gitu haha...
& MIRUL THANX A BUNCH for doing that FOR ME!! I owe u big one! hehe...
Mr ERIC..
Thanx for visiting the site!! What an honour to have a Non-Malaysian visiting this almost-exclusively-Malaysians-bounded blog!! haha..
Nevertheless you are always welcomed here!! :D
Just to note.. The background music has got nothing to do with this entry.. It's a compilation of Malay Traditional rhythms compiled together in Noraniza Idris's latest album!!
If you happened to have fallen in love with the music, it surely is worth every penny for you to spend on the album:
LENGGOK 20 TAHUN NORANIZA IDRIS
Available in store!! hehe..
Thanx again for ya visit
Back to you GUBUans..
MinCi memang takdok komentar apa2 ke?? Nak ubah2 mana yg patut ke?? hehe...
Mirul oi.. Mmg TWEET TWEETY BIRD la ko...
Yerp yerp.. Korg kena kasi idea lirik TANPA DENGAR MELODI lagunyer :D hehe
Tp kalo ko nak bayang2 melodi nyer, dia MEMANG CAM SEJIBIK ngan WINTER SONATA kot cuma meriah2 skit hehe...
Citernyer.. Lirik yg ada dalam entry ni adalah lirik yg aku buat... Lirik asal yg FEDTRI kasi tu aku dah blendkan ngan Irama Tradisi Lenggok segala... Dia nyer suku kata tak sama ngan yg aku tulis tu...
Aku tanak pening kepala pakai lirik sama & tukar style nyanyi.. Untuk memudahkan kerja.. Aku nak ada 2 template.. Satu utk Pop-Balad nyer style.. Satu utk Etnik-Traditional nyer style...
Style Etnik-Traditional nyer lirik dah ada... Lirik utk Pop-Balad je yg blom ada...
Sementelahan kisah SAMA BEZA tu hangat antara kita.. Aku nak semadikan lirik ngan TEMA GOSIP tersebut dalam lagu ni miehehe... Aku rasa SESWAI AJOOO :D
Takpo... Kalo mung ada idea... Bagitau je... Part nyanyi2, aku settle sendiri :D Makaceh MIGHULLLL
& last but not least NADHRAH yg baru dapat TEDDY BAU MIRUL - Apa kes ok ko sembur TEDDY aku ngan odour ko MIRUL hahahaha...
Makacih komen ko Nadh!! Kalo ko ada idea, lagi cantik...
Aku nak maksudkan kat situ yg AMARAH di dada tu mampu MENGABUR minda, MERACUN kasih & MENUBA cinta dalam JIWA MANUSIA haa gitu :D
Tp memandangkan ko tak paham.. Bermaksud AKU KENA TUKAR AYAT...
Jadi sila imbuhkan cadangan!! MEKACEH hehehe...
Thanx peeps!! I'd like to have more ideassss plz!! hehe... COPAT COPAT!! Sbb aku mmg nak buang lagu ni dari idop aku!! Nak pk baca entry2 kat blog korg pon takleh disebabkan lagu ni tau... Copat la membantu aku MEMBUNUH INI LAGU :D
Sekian wasalamz!!
salam ihab,
happened to hop in here again (always actually (^-^).
overall, lyric ni dh puitis n tersusun sgt dh. mmg best. tp sbg sorg yg sgt2 suka akn puisi melayu, bg sy ada 1 part ni x puitis sgt aka agak skema ayatnya:
Usah terperdaya
Amarah di dada
Yang mengaburi minda
Meracun kasih
Menuba cinta
Jiwa manusia
part yg "usah terperdaya, amarah di dada, yang mengaburi minda" tu skema nyaaa. last 3 lines tu dh best dh. puitis. tp nya, yg atas tu maybe boleh tukar jd:
Usaikan kaca-kaca
Yang tajam membaja
Amarah di dada
Meracun kasih
Menuba cinta
Jiwa manusia
Ni idea gitu2 je. since awk kata nak maksudkan ada sesuatu yg rangsang rasa amarah dalam dada yg merosakkan jiwa manusia tu sendiri sbb masih lg melihat pd perbedaan yg wujud, why not diironikkan amarah tu pd sesuatu yg boleh merosakkan/menjahanamkan/menyakitkan mcm kaca/sembilu/duri etc n tunjukkun yg benda tula yg menyebabkn tersemainya lg amarah tu.
huhu..idea aje.n sorry kalau suku katanya juga dh lari n x menepati apa yg awk nak sebenarnya. but i lyk dis lyric s a whole. it has d point to b delivered clearly. perjuangkan BAHASA kita (ayat [poyo debater pencen!)--> surely abg wanzue marah+gelak sakan baca ni =p
ngaaa..
itula dia..
setelah membaca komenan sarah..
baru mendapati yg kurang puitis..
kita orang2 BM ni Ihab,cepat jer terasa klu ayat2 tu tak puitis kan kan
anyways alang2 da mengomen
aku turut merasakan
Jangan kau dibuta
Bayang beza perbedaan
Semarakkan lakaran persamaan
Antara kita
jangan kau dibuta..sounds too harsh n yet tak kene..
tp nak letak kabur or anyword sewaktu dgnnye cam x seswai
oit.. tweety tweety bird tuh aku lar.. apa plak MIRUL.. ngeeeeeeeeee..oh komenan sarah ngan nad sgt bernas OK
Salam,
Sarah,
Now i know why ur blog hasnt been updated 4 a while.. ooooooooo blog hop kat blog org yer? nges nges nges.
but
i dun know 4 a fact u can write a song.huhu.to out my surprise.well done dear.im so proud of u.ur talent is impressive n shudnt let it wasted.
p/s debater pencen? huhu apekah itu? debater tue ape? abg x tahu laaaa
ihab,
dere u go.sum1 who is in da same line with you.sarah has a deep interest in malay literature n i cud see she can go further.please train her.nges nges nges.but princess has a great expertise to offer as well.lambang abg tdk mendelete nad begitu aje. =)
princess,
ermm ape kata 'jgn kau dibuta' tue ditukar kpd 'jgn kau diperdaya?'
just a thought
x
minci,
lambang ihab sudah melupakan awak dan merindui mirul..
harap maklum.
x
Salam..
haha... baruu jer satu visit aku ke london dah terindu2 ihab kat aku yer? wahhh dasat nih! tanda ihab kena balas lawatan aku ke london dgn lawatan ke terengganu jua adanya! insya-Allah!
Tweety bird? Tak faham...
Ihab aku nk mintak maaf jua sbb lambat masuk! Aku rasa lyric lagu ni memang SARAT dgn maksud2 tersembunyi jua, dan aku sangat kagumi bakat ko utk menyelitkan unsur2 nieh!! Memang tabik spring aku kat ko berNewton-Newton nieh! (tanda skala spring adalah Newton)
Anyways, bagi aku yg kurang puitis ni, semua tang lyric tu dah perfect dah. Cuma tang
"Umpama kilau intan permata
Terbandingkan silauan kaca
Biarpun jauhari mampu membeda
Namun di mata seri nan sama"
... tu, ayat last sekali aku rasa seri di HATI bukan seri di mata. Sebab sejauh mana kita nilai superficial appearence pun, di hati tetap sama, benda yg sama, warmth yg sama jua.
Memang beza di mata rupa dan kelembutan/kekasaran, tapi hakikatnya (di hati) kita adalah produk yg sama.
Dan aku sokong jugak si sarah tu - usai bagai ni ada elemen2 indon! Ko tau jelah ihab, masyarakat malaysia sekarang suka anything FOREIGN. Ada ayat2 indon sikit kat lagu tu mula la diorang suka (IMHO lar). So aku rasa kalau ko masukkan ayat2 usai sume2 tu maybe lagi interesting kot lyric dia.
Lyric ni punyai maksud yg sangat dalam dan berlapis2 - dan sesuai digunakan di semua keadaan yang menuntut kita mementingkan persamaan di sebalik perbezaan. Aku sekali lagi respek ko Ihab, mcm mana ko dapat balance kerja seni ko dgn kerja akademic ko, sah2 lar student medic (esp kat london, busy kater nyer kan haha) ada banyak benda lain kn buat.
So aku buat kesimpulan it's either ure plain brilliant, or u bribed the lecturers/examiners with a million british pound. That's all.
tumpang gembira...
rizal,
takkan tumpang gumbira jer kot. sila sumbangkan idea ok
mirul,
if ihab bribes his lecturers, no assurannce u wont bribe urs.haha. student medic kat crimea cbuk gak ape. siap blh join main bola bagai nih!!!!! (^_^)
love,
x
matila ihab salah orang..
sila malu
salam ihab,
1st sekali nak kasi tau mirul, usai tu bukan bahasa indon tau. bahasa kita pun ada usai. maksudnya sudah/selesai/tamat. jadi kalau guna usaikan bawa maksud sudahkan/tamatkan n yg sama wkt dgnnya.
2ndly pasal verse2 2nd para. bg sy, sy setuju dgn apa ihab guna.word 'mata' tu dh betul dh.sy rasa sy faham apa yg ihab maksudkan dlm para tu. ok.cuba tgk dlm verse1 (ihab, betulkan sy klu apa yg sy faham ni salah,ok). yg cuba disampaikan kt situ is: disebabkan terlalu ,memandang pd perbezaan, yg hampir sama pun kita akn tetap nampak yg bezanya. contohnya pd intan permata dgn kaca la. tp lepas tu dlm verse2 2nd para, ihab cuba sampaikan: suruh kita yg mendgr ni tidak memandang pd perbezaan sbb mcm dlm verse2 1st para kata, sbb hakikat kelahiran kita luhurnya sama. so kesinabungan 1st para, ihab cuba sampaikan sugguhpun hakikat kaca, permata n jauhari tu berbeza klu kita nilai mereka dgn hati, namun seri mereka semua ni d mata kita sama aja.nk dipendekkan cerita, jgnlah pandang pd perbezaan. pandanglah pd persamaan.tu point nya.
sorry ihab. sy melebey daaa kt sini. huhu...~~
Salam ALL!! SALAM!!!
WAHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Giler korg!!! TENKIU MENKIU!!!
Korg nyer responds ARE SOOOOO OVERWHELMING!!!
Baru semlm aku post... Berduyun dah korg kasi komen... THANX LOADS!!
Especially to SARAH yg walaupon tak sampai umur setahun jagung dok di A-N-I, tp ilmiah bahasanya tampak terserlah dengan pandangan kritikan dan cadangan yg melimpah ruah!!
THANK YOU SARAH ;)
YOUR IDEAS ARE VERY VERY BRILLIANT INDEED!! And they have all been considered in my latest edited version of the lyrics!!
& same goes to all of you actually!!
NADHRAH thanx!!
Aku agree ngan ko... Ayat BUTA tu nampak harsh.. & aku tukar ikut idea WanZue - sila refer attached lyrics di akhir komentar ni & KRITIK LAGI kalo ada apa2 idea hehe...
MINCI sorry morry ok TWEET TWEETY!! hahaha...
Aku nak kasi alasan apa huh terNAMPAK NAMA KO IBARAT NAMA MIRUL!??!?
Aku rasa ada 2 faktor:
1) ENTRY ni aku dok sebut nama korg dua
2) NADHRAH accuse BEAR aku bau MIRUL
Haahahaha... Sila accept my applogy ok :P
To date ko mmg takde komentar lagi ke?? Puas ati je memanjang aisehhh... Senang ok kalo laki buat ko jadi bini... Sumer benda "OK je bang" hahahaha...
MIRUL wawaweee... Memang TERSERLAH ke aku teRINDU detik2 manis kita sumer kat LONDON?? Sorry ok terbawak2 sampai ke blog!! UNCONCIOUS PLEASE hahaha...
But anyway... Bout ya comment... Has also been taken into consideration... & perubahan kat lirik dibuat supaya MAKNAnya lebih TERSERLAH... Walaupon SARAH dah terang PANJANG LEBAR & YESSSS!! Ko nak cakap apa pon WANZUE cakapppp la!! Dengan penerangan PANJANG LEBAR SARAH tu mmg TAK SYAK lagi SARAH & AKU sama serasi lagi MESRAAAA niiii... hahahaha... Cayok la you SARAH... U understood well what i'm trying to put forward through the lyrics hehe...
But all in all.. Sbb ko ada kesangsian.. Aku harus tukar... Harus la antara sumer2 org kat sini, KO YG PALING PATUT PAHAM isi kandungan lirik ni... Tp memandangkan ko pon terawangan... Aku seraya mengambil decision utk tukar baris tu... Hopefully this time is clearer...
Last but not least... My LATEST FAVOURITE FIGURE in A-N-I... Cik SARAH El-Habibahh... heheh
Your idea is an inspiration indeed!! Mmg biasanya dalam prosa kita ni, bebenda cam duri sembilu segala ni diguna utk melambangkan KEPEDIHAN... MOTIF AKU TAK TERPK??!! hahaha... Thanx for reminding!! Aku dah masukkan unsur2 tu dalam lirik yg baru diedit...
& please do not hesitate TO GIVE MORE COMMENTS!! Sebarang pembaharuan mmg amat ku alu2kan ;) THANK YOU SARAH!!
OKie dokie... To end, here's the edited version of the lyrics (part edited is written in BOLD)
BEZA SAMA BERBEDA
Verse 1
Bagai dalam jurang di lautan
Bagai jauh mega di awangan
Hakikatnya kelahiran kau & aku berbeza
Umpama kilau intan permata
Terbandingkan silauan kaca
Biarpun sekilas tampak serupa
Namun zahirnya tetap berbeda
chorus
Hentilah kau membenci
Rintihan naluri ini
Terima daku seadanya
Aku hadir begini
Usah Diperdaya
Bayang beza perbedaan
Semarakkan lakaran persamaan
Antara kita
Verse 2
Walau dalam jurang di lautan
Walau jauh mega di awangan
Hakikatnya kelahiran kita luhurnya sama
Umpama kilau intan permata
Terbandingkan silauan kaca
Biarpun jauhari mampu membeda
Seri di mata tampak serupa
repeat chorus
Bridge
Usai hasad lara
Sembilu berbisa
Yang menusuk di jiwa
Meracun sukma
Menuba cinta
Luka selamanya
repeat chorus & end
KEEP COMMENTING!!
yer.. aku akui aku memang bini yang patuh pada laki.. maka beruntunglah laki aku.. hahaha
salam ihab,
sperb version! dah comey tomey dah!!
ayat "seri di mata tampak serupa" tu lg menjelaskan maksud. well done ihab.
sy paling suka chorus. meaningful sgguh. oh dunia! terima daku seadanya. aku hadir begini!
~exam mode yg menggunung tinggi ni~
ahahahah..
IHAB
that one is a masterpiece~
ihab... testing nak post komens kat sini~~~
yeayyy~~~
akhirnyehhh~!!
ihab~!! nak dgr lagu~!!
syifa,
boleh pung..
x
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Salam..
BEAR ITU TIDAK BERBAU AKU SAMA SEKALI!!!
Aku tak peluk bear itu malah aku keluarkan dari kotak straight away aku kasi si NAD!
Maybe the fact that the bear was posted with my sweater agaknyer hehe...
Harap public dapat clearkan salah faham hehe..
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